I Love
fish and I
love fishing.
I think of the
grouchiest fish
hope- fully wishing.
He'll open
his big gossiping mouth,
and give his dirty looks.
While his grumpy lips,
Wrap around my hook.
Monday, March 31, 2014
Ten Ways of Looking at a Chicken Sandwich
10 Ways of Looking at
a Chicken Sandwich
-1-
I am more hungry than
she. The sandwich is hers.
-2-
My stomach is small,
The sandwich is
large.
My peers are larger
than I.
-3-
The sandwich is
there.
I am not.
I am with the
sandwiches
disappointing son…
the salad.
-4-
I am 4th
in line,
The last sandwich is
3rd.
-5-
The sandwich looks
like my bride walking down the aisle.
It had mayonnaise on
it though.
I hate it.
-6-
I am the 6th
youngest son
and the first
hungriest.
Sandwiches are distributed.
That as a nice snack.
-7-
The number 7 is what
I order at Wendy’s.
It’s a chicken
sandwich.
-8-
The chicken sandwich
has been sitting for a long while
I’m pretty poor and
even more so, cheap.
Upset stomach for 3
days.
-9-
I am big the sandwich
is small.
I finish and am still
very empty.
Everything looks like
a chicken sandwich now.
-10-
Ten years old and
ordering off the adult menu.
I am so mature now
but my sandwich is so not finished.
I hide my shame and
half my sandwich under the napkin so my dad won’t see.
Wednesday, March 12, 2014
Event Factory
Renee Gladman does a good job in a few passages of using language and metaphors; writing in a way which is furiously beautiful.
'The evening air is tender'
'The light is yellow'
The morning is a 'greener yellow at the start of the day but every moment growing golden'
This for me, portraying/relating things to color makes me appreciate the importance of experience. Almost as if we are born one way and slowly molded into our own color. Everything the narrative tries to do ends in failure, but still experience happens anyway. This is relatable fore me to times and failures where the important thing to do is to continue moving forward and learn from mistakes. It is like when something awful and constricting happens in your life and the only way to deal with it is to deal with it.
'Nothing happens, nothing happens, then everything is "said" to have happened...'
It's almost as if she is saying that structurally "eventually things happen suddenly". But pessimistically as well she could easily be saying that experiences are only so long, they come and go so quickly, stop giving them so much credit. It's almost as if she is discrediting memory as well. Like there is nothing we can do to stop time from clouding it. That we wait and wait for special moments only to be forgotten. This is quite a depressing concept. However, she may be saying enjoy life and let it happen rather than trying to force or recreate old happiness. Life will go its own way, you don't need a "map" or a guide, only instinct and an open mind.
Wednesday, March 5, 2014
Splice Poem
Hail the heav'n-born Prince of Peace
Upon becoming an Eastern Michigan University Baseball Player
Hail the Sun of Righteousness
To insure that you are representing in a positive manner
Light and life to all he brings
In determining your appearance, academic achievement, and performance.
Ris'n with heal-ing in his wings
to provide you with the confidence and mental toughness to succeed.
To write this poem I used random lines from 'Hark the Harald Angels Sing' and our Introduction to Becoming and EMU Baseball Player Handout.
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